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June 30, 2008

26 phrases you should never use in writing

Excerpted from the Executive Report: Business Writing: A Guide to Clear, Concise and Effective Writing

 

Certain phrases are part of the business world - but that doesn’t mean they’re the best choices. You can easily improve your writing and more effectively communicate by using more direct terms and phrases. Here are some examples of wordy phrases and what to use instead:

 

Instead of:                                                            Use:

At this point in time                                               Now

Come to the conclusion                                         Conclude

Despite the fact that                                              Although

Exhibits a tendency to                                           Tends

I am of the opinion                                                 I think

In the amount of                                                    for

Is indicative of                                                       indicates

It is incumbent on me                                            I must

Make a decision to                                                Decide

On the grounds that                                              Since

Perform an analysis of                                           Analyze

Pertaining to                                                         About

Prior to that time                                                   Before

Provide information about                                       Inform

Reached an agreement                                          Agreed

Subsequent to                                                      After

Take under advisement                                          Consider

The committee made an agreement                        We decided

The question as to whether                                    Whether

To summarize the above                                        In summary

Under no circumstances                                        Never

We deem it advisable                                            I suggest

With a view to                                                       To

With regard to                                                       About

With this in mind                                                   Therefore

You will find attached                                            Here is


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Great article. It is not a phrase, but here is one of my pet language peeves:

"Utilize use, don't use utilize"

One that drives me crazy is "very much so".

Can we quit utilizing the word "utilize"? How about if we just use the word "use"?

"Having said that...." - instead say "So..."

"Synergy" - how about " " - I have no suggestion to replace synergy

For the most part, I agree with the article, But in certain circumstances, one should use the trite "catch" phrases to avoid appearing too informal or direct; although clearer, some people may interpret the shorter phrases as too aggressive.

"Call my office" use "Call me"

One phrase that most people use too much AND often get wrong is "That said...." which is actually a useful transitionary phrase BUT I've noticed many people will say "Having said that,...." or "That being said...." It should be "That said.." or nothing!

At this point in time, I have come to the conclusion, that due to the fact, that I exhibit a tendency to be somewhat wordy, it is incumbent on me to perform an analysis of my writing. I will gladly take under advisement, with a view to the future, that it may be deemed advisable for me, under most circumstances, to adjust my writing style with regard to the aforementioned wordiness on the grounds that in providing information about subsequent events, I may be less wordy and therefore be more succinct in providing information to my fellow Americans.

I can't stand when people say "often times" instead of just "often."

Another one is using "irregardless" for "regardless."

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